You recently received furniture that was already damaged at the time of arrival. Write a letter to the manager of shipping company about it and say
- What furniture did you order?
- What was the damage?
- Suggest what needs to be done about it
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to complain about the damaged table which your shipping company took responsibility for delivery. Let me elaborate the specific situation for your consideration.
Last week, I purchased a studying table from a commercial website, named tiki.com.vn and chose ABC Ltd., Co.- your delivery company as the only suggestion. This was a classic wooden table, with four fixed legs, designed with floral and foliage decoration on the surface. I am really into its elegance and versatile function as I can not only study on this table but also store many personal things in its drawer.
Unfortunately, when your staff gave it to me, I found that one leg was broken down and the beautiful table was scratched severely. Honestly, I was so disappointed about this situation.
I definitely refuse to receive this damaged table and I have entitle to ask you deal with the seller to compensate me a new one with same type and color. I hope you can cope with this issue and provide me the new table no later than next two weeks.
I await your prompt remedy.
Yours faithfully,
Thuan.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
... complain about the damaged table which your shipping company took responsibility fo...
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Line 9, column 62, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'entitled'.
Suggestion: entitled
...o receive this damaged table and I have entitle to ask you deal with the seller to comp...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... table no later than next two weeks. I await your prompt remedy. Yours fait...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, honestly, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92592592593 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71841327305 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4832681174 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6363636364 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124195746052 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047046218189 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501436425574 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681304803318 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477451012792 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.