The table below shows the figures (in thousand) for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980.
Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The given table illustrates the amount of prisoners in the five-country over the period of 50 years.
It is true that the figures for imprisonment in three countries such as Australia, New Zealand, and Canada considerably reduced notwithstanding, the numbers in The United States and The Great Britain showed a drastic increase between 1930 and 1980.
On the one hand, people who was serving in prison at New Zealand was entirely 100 thousands in the begin of the stage and dropped down by a half of its amount in 1940 before growing again and reaching at almost 85 thousands in the year of 1980. While Australian prisoned criminals slightly fluctuated from around 70,000 to roughly 50,000 persons, these Canadian figures have smoothly declined from about 120,000 to just 70,000 in the period of fifty-year.
On the other hand, UK was the only country which has a significant rise of imprisonment in the five-country from the lowest measure at just 30,000 in 1930 to its peak stood at 85,000 in 1980. Nevertheless, US has become one of the countries which have the highest prisoners in 1930 with about 100,000 persons. Finally, there is a magnificent fluctuation in the number of prisoners in the jails of this nation in 50 years before reaching its peak at nearly 135,000 prisoners.
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- The table below shows the figures in thousand for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980 Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...w Zealand was entirely 100 thousands in the begin of the stage and dropped down by a half...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, nevertheless, so, while, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9400921659 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80467659318 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585253456221 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.9020275261 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.142857143 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 22.9334400587 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 5.23603664747 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156813539633 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810101010957 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705448269748 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115673884592 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663043480319 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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