You are a member of an organization which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter
• explain why you are writing
• describe what went wrong with the meal and service
• suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant
Dear Sir,
I am writing to complain about the poor service and food received at your restaurant yesterday by me and my colleagues when we visited to have lunch and chat up on activities relating to our old secondary school reunion planning.
we ordered for variety of your delicacies, jollof rice, fried rice, chicken and chips and coconut rice. but, unfortunately the chips we were served were over fried and burnt, so not edible. we called the attention of the manager and demanded a refund of the amount paid or a replacement be given but, he only apologized and insisted we cannot get a refund or a replacement for the food.
I am calling your attention to this so you can investigate, orient your staffs and make sure we get a refund because we could not eat the food and to encourage future patronage. I will also recommend you engage the service of a quality control staff so that the standards of food served per time can be maintained and regulated.
I hope to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Ife
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about the poor ...
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Suggestion:
... old secondary school reunion planning. we ordered for variety of your delicacie...
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Suggestion: We
...secondary school reunion planning. we ordered for variety of your delicacies,...
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Suggestion: But
...ce, chicken and chips and coconut rice. but, unfortunately the chips we were serve...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ut rice. but, unfortunately the chips we were served were over fried and burnt, s...
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Suggestion: We
...re over fried and burnt, so not edible. we called the attention of the manager and...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...me can be maintained and regulated. I hope to hearing from you soon. Your...
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Line 10, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Ife
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7182320442 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67164634815 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624309392265 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2086060515 44.8134815571 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0953231128276 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488340653922 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367780639327 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692396253347 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396932243854 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.