The street where you live is very polluted. Write to the local council and ask to act about this situation. You should say
– What is the main problem?
– How does it affect your street?
– Give some suggestions and request action
Dear mr. Jones,
My name is Catherine Williams. I’m writing to express my concern regarding ecological situation on the Bakers street , East London.
I have been living on Bakers street for over a decade now. In the last few years air pollution has overwhelmingly increased in the area due to the heavy car traffic throughout the street. There is a new mall has been built nearby and shoppers cut corners to get there by using the road as it’s a faster way than driving by the highway.
Due to this issue a constant smog hovers above the houses on the street. Even with closed windows a smell of carbon dioxide can be sensed inside of a property. There are few neighbors that suffer from asthma, this detrimental atmosphere deteriorating their health. I believe this would have a negative effect on all people living here as well!
On behalf of all inhabitants of Bakers street I would like to require of the restriction of traffic on the street by limiting the access to the residents only. It would reduce harmful gases emission by automobiles in the area, so we would have a fresher air and, therefore, lead more comfortable and healthy life here.
I hope you can settle this matter to our satisfaction.
Yours faithfully,
Catherine Williams.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cological situation on the Bakers street , East London. I have been living on Bak...
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Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have a fresher air and, therefore, lead more comfortable and healthy life here. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85648148148 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70307826786 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657407407407 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1761713441 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4166666667 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143395972022 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460219497476 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423500342844 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750907413413 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161279180306 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.