Dear Sir,
The name of my street where I reside is called ututu and It is very polluted at the moment. The main problem we're facing is the lack of dumpsters to accommodate the daily refuse waste and negligence on the part of the refuse disposal staff in taking away the trash of the neighborhood daily.
Big piles of trash can be seen on various parts of the street and this results in the major traffic which we experience every day. Because of the offensive odour that comes from the dumpster, the environment has become very unhealthy for residents. Those in charge of disposing wastes in the area fail to clear the bin daily and this results in breeding of mosquitoes which infect the residents with malaria.
I'd appreciate if you increase the number of dumpsters on my street so as to accommodate the amount of trash available on a daily basis. Due to the lack of removal of daily waste, my wife also suggests that there should be strict monitoring to make sure those in charge of emptying the dumpster do it on a daily basis.
I hope you act on this as soon as possible.
Yours Faithfully,
Adam Grant
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, The name of my street where I reside is ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...nfect the residents with malaria. Id appreciate if you increase the number o...
^^
Line 9, column 68, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...se the number of dumpsters on my street so as to accommodate the amount of trash availab...
^^^^^^^^
Line 18, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Yours Faithfully, Adam Grant
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6815920398 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48196384963 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592039800995 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.2146828341 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.555555556 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1654537708 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713055652367 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501685585652 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1089209197 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409964155853 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, The name of my street where I reside is ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...nfect the residents with malaria. Id appreciate if you increase the number o...
^^
Line 9, column 68, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...se the number of dumpsters on my street so as to accommodate the amount of trash availab...
^^^^^^^^
Line 18, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Yours Faithfully, Adam Grant
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6815920398 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48196384963 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592039800995 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.2146828341 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.555555556 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1654537708 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713055652367 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501685585652 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1089209197 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409964155853 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.