You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
tell him which team won
describe the conditions on the day
say how you felt about the match
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Jay,
Hope you are doing speedy recovery.It was sad moment for us that your leg got fractured in the middle of practice session.
The cricket match we played last Saturday was disappointing. we lost the match by 5 runs. We won the toss and elected to bowl. Opposite team scored 20 runs in 3 overs but Rohit came for batting and he started hitting six and four by which the score of opposing team went to 50 runs in 5 overs.
There were two reasons for loosing the match. First , the pitch was very muddy as rain had poured down few minutes before the match and other thing was we were not able to find good substitute for wicket keeper like you used to do.
Let us know when you will be discharged from the hospital as we have match on this Saturday, so that we will make some arrangements to enjoy the next match. We all wish for a speedy recovery.
Best wishes,
Saurabh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 36, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ay, Hope you are doing speedy recovery.It was sad moment for us that your leg got...
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Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iddle of practice session. The cricket match we played last Saturday was disapp...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...played last Saturday was disappointing. we lost the match by 5 runs. We won the t...
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Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... was disappointing. we lost the match by 5 runs. We won the toss and elected to b...
^^
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e for batting and he started hitting six and four by which the score of opposing ...
^^
Line 4, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...went to 50 runs in 5 overs. There were two reasons for loosing the match. First...
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Line 4, column 29, Rule ID: LOOSING_EFFORTRECORDSEASON[1]
Message: Did you mean 'losing the'?
Suggestion: losing the
... 5 overs. There were two reasons for loosing the match. First , the pitch was very muddy...
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Line 4, column 53, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...two reasons for loosing the match. First , the pitch was very muddy as rain had p...
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Line 4, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...First , the pitch was very muddy as rain had poured down few minutes before the m...
^^
Line 4, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...other thing was we were not able to find good substitute for wicket keeper like y...
^^
Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arged from the hospital as we have match on this Saturday, so that we will make s...
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Line 7, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... speedy recovery. Best wishes, Saurabh
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3313253012 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2007108204 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.71686746988 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3721893154 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138548717319 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476019766396 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384489170231 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082828263555 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00803633714019 0.0580467560999 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.