The profession as a doctor is a profession which many people really need in the society. The people assume that doctors are more important than inventors. Discuss and give your own opinion.
In this globalization era, the profession as a doctor is a profession which many people really essential in the society. The people assume that doctors are more notable than inventors. I believe, both of the occupations are important in human life.
As we know, population in the world getting more and more every years and a lot of people get many diseases because the environmental changing and condition place of living. These days, people prefer to need doctors than inventors because many diseases threat the human life. Then, the citizen need doctor for healing their diseases. Beside that, the doctors give benefit to inhabitant, for instance confer some advices about how to survive in healthy environment and decline the impact of unhealthy life.
In my view, the profession of inventors are as great as doctors because today we want some tools or devices that could refine people’s work. The inventors not only produce a new devices but also discover new enlightenment which support other subjects, like medical, biology and economics. Beside that, the inventor find new invention, for example new diseases which are dangerous for the world or invent a new device which could generate easier our task, like cleaner stuff, tools of work and etc. And today, we shortage of inventor because it is hard to become an inventors and need special ability to develop new things which can accept by other peoples.
In a nutshell, both of that jobs are very significant, especially for increasing and create better our live. Then, without both of them our life turn into not balance.
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which many people really essential in the society.
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population in the world getting more and more every years
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because the environmental changing and condition place of living.
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discover new enlightenment which support other subjects
discover new enlightenment which supports other subjects
we shortage of inventor because it is hard to become an inventors and need special ability to develop new things which can accept by other peoples.
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especially for increasing and create better our live.
especially for increasing and creating better of our lives.
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