some government spend massive on an individual for an international sport event rathar than public welfare. Do you agree or disagree?
In today's era, one aspect plays very significant role to develop any country that is money. Development of country touches various aspects such as growth in economy, global credibility, achievement in sports and most importantly, living style of citizens. However, some government spend massive on an individual for an international sporting event and not for public welfare. Therefore, I partially agree with this statement.
In the beginning, government spends tremendous money on an individual for establishing competent reputation in the world. Furthermore, there are various aspects and competition, on the basis of which, any country's development can easily be evaluated, wherein sport considers as a key criterion. For instance, America is an unbeatable leader in sports, and always a champion in most of the sports as a result of which, America is successful to show dominance in other areas as well. Similarly, to reinforce more globalization, sport is very imperative as it erupts the feeling of patriotism and unity among players which in turn results in harmony between countries. Therefore, partly, it is better to spend some chunk of money on sports but, by keeping public welfare aspect in consideration.
On the contrary, for any government, the most prioritize area is the welfare of people. Welfare of people comprises proper education, medical facilities, food to eat, sanitation condition, good infrastructure, better employment opportunities and many more. After this, Any government should look towards other aspects. However, by ignoring the welfare of people, any government or country, if try to consolidate its place than somewhere that is just like big mansion on shallow foundation, which ultimately demolish. Therefore, Government must try to maintain balance between all the activities so that nothing could go in the state of negligence.
To sum up, I believe that government functions by the tax of public, consequently government first responsibility seems towards public, but government should try to maintain an equilibrium in all the areas by allocating budget so that development could be taken place in all realms. As someone said, "any country's prosperity depends on the livable situation of its citizens".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, similarly, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as a result, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 30.3222958057 178% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 5.01324503311 559% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1373.03311258 139% => OK
No of words: 345.0 270.72406181 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55072463768 5.08290768461 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17424523442 2.5805825403 123% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 145.348785872 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588405797101 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 419.366225166 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 2.5761589404 349% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3761374387 49.2860985944 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.647058824 110.228320801 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.06452816374 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292942725573 0.272083759551 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962001415751 0.0996497079465 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160180133008 0.0662205650399 242% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176694689187 0.162205337803 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112651943951 0.0443174109184 254% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.8541721854 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.0289183223 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.2367328918 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.42419426049 115% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 63.6247240618 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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