Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.
Although a lot of people believe that friends have a great influence on students but it is not comparable with the role of teachers. Not only in class material but also in many fields of life teachers have unbelievable effects on their students' lives. As a result, I agree with the crucial influence of trainer on young people in any stage of their life. I have three main point in this field which I will explore them in following essay.
Firstly, being patient is very important characteristic in a well trainer. Students are so young who do not have enough experience in dealing with some situations. For instance, when I was in high school, I misunderstood a main concept of my lessons in math, so I felt depress. After asking of my teacher, she explained it for me kindly several times with different ways. I remember that explanation until now and appreciate my teacher's patient.
In addition, by having more knowledge about scientific materials, teachers are the best source for students. For example, when I was working in chemistry laboratory on my project in PhD program, my professor was the only one who helped me in synthesizing new molecules related to cancer. Had not he proposed his opinion about my way of searching, I could not have finished my thesis.
Last but not least, having more experience is the most important factor in a nice teacher in compare with the inexperienced friends. However, a perfect friend try do his/her best for you, but he or she has not proper experience in some hard situations. As a result, it is only a professional teacher who can help you in these conditions. I exemplify my point with a true story about something that happened to me. Last year when I decided to prepare for TOEFL test, I had many problems with the listening skill, I tried more and more, I consulted with my best friends, but I could not improve my skill until I introduced with my English teacher who gave me a good deal of precious experience.
In conclusion, it is clear that the role of teachers in students' lives is vital; not only because of being patient, but also having much information and more experiences. These items are not replaceable with well friends' cooperation.
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- TPO 31 76
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?For the successful development of a country, it is more important for a government to spend money on the education of very young children(five to ten years old) than to spend money on universities.Use 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- TPO37 3
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75520833333 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80977877614 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533854166667 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1167414802 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1052631579 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2105263158 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197881041773 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612128311599 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657154630124 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109620829302 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629132489893 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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