People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
we certainly have heard many-a-times people regretting about an actions which ultimately led to pernicious consequences, hence one should gingerly peruse all the repurcussions which the action might induce. Sometimes the consequences might be life taking.
The best teacher in the world is experience and when it comes to consequences the first thought that comes to our mind is world wars which left so many countries devastated. The war took many sons from their fathers and mothers, brothers from their sisters and eventually left families barren. so-called political leaders which took this decision of starting a world war certainly did not analysed the consequences of world wars. still cripple children are born in Hiroshima-Nagasaki which is the consequence of world war two which was about 100 years back. As per psycologist who briefly studied world war effects maintained that the effects of world war one were so intense that it created such a fear among humans that they had some fear in them about world wars.
when there is more risk attached to the actions people are seen at that point loose their patience and take actions precipitiously. In the world of stock market people loose their families, their house, their reverence when they act inpatiently and react to situations without perusing it's consequences.
but just like the two sides of the coin, there is also the other side of this statement which can be demonstrated by following saying:"If a man has never been failed in his life then he has probably never done any novel thing", this states that if a man keeps on procastinating opportunities just beacuse he/she is afraid of its consequences he/she might end up doing nothing novel in his life.
it is usually said that you cannot bring four things back; first is sped arrow, second is spoken words, third is died person and last but not the least gone opportunity. so just like the spoken word which should be gingerly and prudently chosen and think about thousand times before saying anything, we must also grab the opportunity as and when we are provided without wasting time because the only loss you might have at last is you might end up failing but still you won't regret.
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- People's behaviour is largely determined by forces not of their own making. 50
- People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences. 50
- Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. 58
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree 16
- True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and su 50
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...rd many-a-times people regretting about an actions which ultimately led to pernicious cons...
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... the consequences might be life taking. The best teacher in the world is experie...
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...war two which was about 100 years back. As per psycologist who briefly studied wor...
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...ly. In the world of stock market people loose their families, their house, their reve...
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...end up doing nothing novel in his life. it is usually said that you cannot bring...
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...ly and prudently chosen and think about thousand times before saying anything, we must a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, hence, if, second, so, still, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9811827957 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74656340415 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575268817204 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.1558450068 60.3974514979 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.416666667 118.986275619 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 23.4991977007 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115290711401 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428915941109 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596431405118 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769635536525 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065708396116 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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