You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation, and cost.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regard to the advertisement you published in The Times of India newspaper dated, 20th January 2019.
I am keen at enrolling myself for the conclave on 'Successful Business models' conducted in Singapore, next month. I am a business analyst and am currently working with a leading multinational company. This course seems to offer precisely the topics of my interest.
I request you to kindly inform me about the participation fees and the admission procedure. Furthermore, I would like a detailed itinerary of the schedule pertinent to the programs. Additionally, I will require the particulars on the transportation and accommodation facilities, including all the hidden costs.
I shall be highly obliged if you could help me with all the necessary information so that I can make arrangements accordingly. I request you to list all the documents you will need from my end and mention the preferred mode of payment.
Hoping for a quick and favorable response.
Yours sincerely,
Khushleen Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e conclave on Successful Business models conducted in Singapore, next month. I am...
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...ls conducted in Singapore, next month. I am a business analyst and am currently ...
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...lities, including all the hidden costs. I shall be highly obliged if you could h...
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... mention the preferred mode of payment. Hoping for a quick and favorable respons...
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...favorable response. Yours sincerely, Khushleen Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, furthermore, if, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2874251497 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.224671824 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670658682635 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8323528471 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2727272727 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142852972446 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470503515602 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399971991364 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720068119477 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322320413148 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.