Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is true that protecting the environment is a popular issue these days. However, it is argued that that only politicians be in charge of this duty, I totally disagree with this opinion and I strongly believe that environmental preservation is the responsibility of every inhabitant including the officials.
On the one hand, every meaningful activity of an individual would contribute to protecting the habitat. it is undeniable that the politicians account for a small number of citizens. Therefore, environmental conservation could not be well done if it is merely contributed by actions taken by the authority. every resident might do some habits such as collecting litters, throwing the garbage in the required landfill or stopping poaching endangered animals. Consequently, the outcome could be promising in saving the natural world and the surroundings.
On the other hand, there is no doubt that the government play a vital role in environmental conservation. They do the public relations domestically and internationally in order to raise funds for some work such as constructing the waste or polluted water systems or installing several clean energy machines in the industrial areas. Moreover, thanks to the policies and the banning laws namely financial sentence for any individuals or organisations dumping water, waste or harmful smoke improperly. As a result, the atmosphere could be improved and the living surroundings no longer do harm to inhabitants.
In conclusion, it is certainly true that every appropriate step should be done not only by the politicians but also the civilians so as to save the Earth, the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46511627907 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30092411212 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612403100775 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7354381015 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154322776414 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472746730232 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304819212324 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080134782234 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305217988196 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.