The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
A leader is a member of the society and is considered the most skillful and most judgemental among the people of his group. His responsibility is enormous and his concern is not only about his own interests but also the interests of his sub- ordinates. In this paragraph, we will discuss the extent to which co- operation or competition helps a leader develops his skill.
Many specialists and sociologists might argue that, without competition we won't be able to find the best person in a group and thus a leader. While that might be the truth in some extent, a leader's duty is not to be the best in a group but to make examples so that others can follow. And to make such an environment, a cooperation among the members is a must.
The main responsibity of a leader is to achieve certain objectives and to maintain the welfare of his people. As we all know, it is much easier to earn something when we work together rather we work alone. And this is the essence of the leadership. Leadership should be developed in a way that the leader understands everyone's importance and can utilize anyone according to their fullest strength. Nelson Mendela without the people isn't the Nelson Mandela we know. People don't advertise themselves as a leader, its the people who recognzes their leader and competition is not an option to make a leadership fruitful.
Many of the industrialists and politicians have made huge wealth. They did it through huge competition. They beat every competitors by financially and other means but never quite achieved the leader phenomena. They might be the big shots in some social gatherings but they will never gain the respect like Abraham Lincoln and Martin Luther King did. To be a true leader, a leader has to work with his people so that they can achieve something greater.
A collaborative person is more suited for leadership than the person who works for only himself and only competes with others to excel his skill. A collaborative movie director makes better movies than the director who likes to sit in his chair and only yell action.
Competition is a natural human phenomena and it helps us to develop our skills to the fullest. But a leader has to lead by examples. And what better way to lead than cooperation. Collaboration among his sub- ordinates and cooperation among his teammates can bring something greater, which is the main objective of a leader.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 190, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
...at might be the truth in some extent, a leaders duty is not to be the best in a group b...
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Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[7]
Message: The word 'anyone' in subjunctive clause must be used with a base form of a verb: 'accord'.
Suggestion: accord
...yones importance and can utilize anyone according to their fullest strength. Nelson Mende...
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Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...ngth. Nelson Mendela without the people isnt the Nelson Mandela we know. People dont...
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Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...isnt the Nelson Mandela we know. People dont advertise themselves as a leader, its t...
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Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... dont advertise themselves as a leader, its the people who recognzes their leader a...
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Line 4, column 210, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...er quite achieved the leader phenomena. They might be the big shots in some social g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, thus, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 416.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77403846154 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79508497187 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490384615385 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9244099435 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.347826087 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0869565217 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4347826087 5.21951772744 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108096750651 0.243740707755 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338407821337 0.0831039109588 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414299256718 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0547101440932 0.150359130593 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281945864398 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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