Some people argue that social networking site(e.g. Facebook)may have negative impacts on individuals and the society. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Social networking websites have gained great popularity recently. People against this trend argue that it exerts adverse impacts on both individuals and society. From my perspective, I totally agree with this statement.
The negative information on the website may lead to wrong-doings among online viewers. Since anyone with access to the internet can pose their statements on public, people on the internet may copy those anti-social groups' pattern of thinking. For example, college students may spend most time on playing online games and joining parties after they see the pictures and words posed by drop-outs who consider having fun is the norm.
In addition, society may become less stable and less peaceful. To explain that, negative information can be easily widespread on the internet, and this tendency may impose great pressure on social regulations, thereby tearing the society apart. For instance, a photo posed by a middle-aged adult shows the death of a teenage girl, who accidentally fell from a tall building. However, after adding words claiming the death involved the housekeeper, people online may argue over the setting of housekeeping. Consequently, society may become less harmony.
In conclusion, the popularity of social networking website imposes adverse impact on both net-users and society as a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, may, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5145631068 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79294588305 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640776699029 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5104528275 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240986966333 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855322367299 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545569587608 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14631369679 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553922397504 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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