The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.
A glance at the impact of the opinions given by the celebrities rise a controversial debate whether it is important to young people or not. Often, it is the younger generation which is lured by the celebrities. This is because they are the people with lot of ambitions and aspiration to earn fame and success.
First of all, celebrities like actors, musicians and athletes constantly throw their opinions in media time and again to grab people’s attention. Younger generation constantly follow their favourite celebrities in television, social media pages like facebook and twitter. So celebrities utilize these channels to diffuse their opinions about the social problems, political issues and various scandals. This heroic behaviour attract their followers and the youth try to imitate their celebrity. For example, after a local musician in my area supported a cleanliness compaign, the college students joined him and spread the awareness among the local public.
Besides, younger generation are often fascinated to see the ostentatious display of products advertised by their celebrities. That is why most of the products are advertised by the actors and athletes even though that is not related their field. This often stimulate one’s desire to buy the product resulting in exorbitant expenditure. However, if the celebrity display a bad behaviour in the public, it may inculcate negative attitude among the youth. To make a note, a sexy apparel worn by the actress in a recent award function made some of the youngsters to wear the same costume subsequently. This unprecendented behaviour is totally unwanted in the real world.
However, the older people are more matured and composed enough to differentiate between the good and bad. Though they follow the celebrities and athletes, their opinions have very little significance in their lives as they know the reality. Most often they have very little time to follow them owing to their busy work schedule and responsibilities. In my personal experience, when I was a teenager I followed an actress constantly and buy all my dresses and accessories like her. Whereas now, as I grew older, I don’t have time to even watch movies because of running back and forth between work and home.
I would like to conclude by saying that it is the younger generation who are fascinated to follow the celebrities and athletes and religiously practice their opinions and actions. The older people have enough experience to decide their thoughts and actions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, may, so, whereas, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2128.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28039702233 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92529206154 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528535980149 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.445277057 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1904761905 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165911275983 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514350763264 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503780915929 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10563077619 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600867597851 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.