In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.
A glance at the career perspectives these days, rises a controversial debate on the selection of a career to lead a successful life. Some may support the fact that it was easier in the past to decide a career, some people may not. I would like to shed some light based on multitude of ideologies and examples in the following essay.
The most exquisite point in choosing a career is to lead a successful life with fame and money. The rapidly growing technology and career opportunities in a particular field forcefully make many parents and students to choose a particular field by chance than by their choice. Even though the individual is least interested in that field, they may pursue it just to have a stable job and a secure life. Having a secure job is of paramount importance if a person is a sole breadwinner of the family.
Moreover, with the growing unemployment rate, getting a job is a Herculean task and also sufficiently earning for the living is yet obstacle. If someone chose a career because of his passion, he may have the desire to work perfectly but the poor income the job fetches may incontrovertibly irritate the person and make him loose interest. My life is a perfect example or the choice of a career by interest. I always had a passion to become a dentist and hence I learnt the profession with utmost interest. But in contrary, because of the mushrooming of dental clinics these days, I couldn't fetch more income and have to work a lot to make my earnings. However my friends in the IT industry could make the income easily with lesser effort and responsibility than mine.
Admittedly, in the past, there were very few fields of work. The narrow platform they had then had its own setbacks but it dint plunge them by choosing a profession in which they were not interested. They were very clear in what they had to choose.
To sum up, passion has very little role these days to lead a successful living. Passion and career are in two different ends these days. The plenty of career opportunities and rapidly evolving probabilities has left the present generation with lot of challenges in choosing their profession.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72148541114 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79738626407 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522546419098 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3148962386 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6842105263 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8421052632 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42105263158 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189327109574 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056215267439 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492093491006 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103865758623 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646043262678 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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