WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
It is important to consider the type of meals that we consume. Over the years there has been an increase in the number of people who opt for quick-meals instead of home cooked meals. this essay will explain why I believe the benefits of this trend are more than the drawbacks.
On the one hand, a major negative attribute of fast food is the health challenge that eating may lead to. research revealed these meals include a high concentration of preservatives and other additives aimed at lengthening the shelf life which have side effects. For example, tin foods tend to cause cancer and are discouraged in most developed countries. obesity is another likely result that often causes more critical health issues and heart related sicknesses. Conversely, freshly made meals are more healthier and less probable to lead to health problems.
However, I am of the opinion that there are positives such as convenience. more often than not these meals can be made in 3 to 5 minutes. For instance, the cooking time for noodles 2 minutes. Similarly, quick meals are not only easy to make they are very affordable also. This is because the cost of buying a ready to serve meal is cheaper than purchasing cooking ingredients for home cooking. home cooked are meals are more expensive and usually take longer to cook.
In conclusion, i think the positives of convenience and affordability that come with eating fast food are far more than the disadvantages of health challenges and expenses when compared to home cooked meals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: This
...ick-meals instead of home cooked meals. this essay will explain why I believe the b...
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Suggestion:
...s. this essay will explain why I believe the benefits of this trend are more than...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at eating may lead to. research revealed these meals include a high concentration...
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Suggestion: Obesity
...scouraged in most developed countries. obesity is another likely result that often cau...
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Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
...ses. Conversely, freshly made meals are more healthier and less probable to lead to health pro...
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Suggestion: More
...here are positives such as convenience. more often than not these meals can be made ...
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Suggestion:
...e often than not these meals can be made in 3 to 5 minutes. For instance, the coo...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...y easy to make they are very affordable also. This is because the cost of buying a r...
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Suggestion: Home
...g cooking ingredients for home cooking. home cooked are meals are more expensive and...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...take longer to cook. In conclusion, i think the positives of convenience and ...
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...d are far more than the disadvantages of health challenges and expenses when comp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, however, if, may, similarly, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94552529183 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68657812265 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618677042802 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9840993227 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0280399058191 0.244688304435 11% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00989459243664 0.084324248473 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0152652676608 0.0667982634062 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0192303420894 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200056710921 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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