Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
There is no doubt universities play a crucial role in educating society. However, while some believe that these education should be geared exclusively towards subject that may be of practical use in the future, I would agree with those who argue that one's choice of degree should lie with a student.
Firstly, it is vital that universities equip are workforce with scientist, professionals that enable our society to progress. This is because a country without such expert is a country without the means to plan, create or maintain essential features for modern life. For instance, if we did not have university educated engineers, we will not enjoy such basic transport facilities and infrastructure as subways, trams and bridges. The argument goals that if students are allowed to choose what they want to study, then there will be a shortage of this important workers.
However I believe allowing students to choose what they want to study is the only way to acquire motivated passionate, and thus competent professionals. The reason for this is that free choice provides people with a sense of what autonomy, and research has shown that autonomy is a necessary catalyst for drive and enthusiasm. As a result, don't have the impetus to master their subject rather than merely aim for good enough. Conversely, if universities force students into one category of study, then the drive for mastery that would have come with pursuing their passion will disappear.
In conclusion, although it is of critical importance that universities continue to supply society with professionals in the field of technology and science, I feel that it should be the student’s choice to do so on the basis that this will give them the motivation to excel in their work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this education' or 'these educations'?
Suggestion: this education; these educations
...ciety. However, while some believe that these education should be geared exclusively towards su...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...shortage of this important workers. However I believe allowing students to choose w...
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Line 5, column 341, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... for drive and enthusiasm. As a result, dont have the impetus to master their subjec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, then, thus, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09655172414 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83288821665 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589655172414 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1431434467 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.363636364 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5454545455 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270904467544 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888241575198 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810219412654 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155615639043 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507441394211 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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