People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company that provides the connection. In your letter,
• Describe the problem.
• Explain how that is affecting people.
• Say what the company should do to help.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction towards the internet service your company is providing in our area, Lavender’s street. To elucidate, most of the times internet is down, speed is so slow. Even if it starts working, it will only be for 5-10 minutes. While installing the modem, I informed your technician to install a high-speed modem but he did not pay attention.
With the advent of the online network, most of the people are dependent on it for the smooth and hassle-free day-to-day activities. people who are looking for jobs are affected as they rely on the internet to search for jobs. Another worst part is for paying the bills when we have to enter the card details twice and sometimes thrice as well. There are few people in our locality doing online jobs has a great impact on their jobs.
I would request you to look into this matter and provide an alternate solution to the people in our area until you can provide with an alternative solution like a mobile dongle to your customers considering all the difficulties mentioned above. This will not tar your company’s reputation also.
Looking forward to your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 174, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'times'' or 'time's'?
Suggestion: times'; time's
...pos;s street. To elucidate, most of the times internet is down, speed is so slow. Eve...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
... and hassle-free day-to-day activities. people who are looking for jobs are affected a...
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Line 4, column 294, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... not tar your company's reputation also. Looking forward to your prompt respo...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93658536585 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78119802654 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663414634146 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.586830574 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3333333333 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233785053211 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774418974042 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581206432255 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119580414444 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353099150475 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.