Some young people are leaving countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in countryside? What are the problems of this issue? What can be done to solve this problem?
In the today's dynamically globalized world, an issue of moving out of young adults to developed has become one of the most crucial problems calling for immediate attention for governments. There seem to be a problem involved, and a solution, which I will examine further.
To begin with, our world has been developing constantly. There are a lot of new facilities in cities which are created literally everyday. Thus, megalopolises are required to find new people. Another aspect to be mentioned is that more young people are leaving countryside to become wealthy. Unfortunately, hardly can one deny that this trend is killing towns and countryside where young adults grew up. For instance, it was reported in 2017 in The New York Times that small towns in Russia are losing about 80 per cent of 20-odd people who moved to the cities annually because of money and possibilities.
Turning to possible solution, perhaps the immediate step for governments would be to make small towns more attractive for youngsters. This could be done thorough to transfer some huge companies to the countryside. Indeed, on several occasions such an approach was proven to be efficient. Take the case of Japan. About a decade ago the government of this country made a law that the biggest companies of Japan cannot be located in huge cities. As a result, young people stayed in their own towns since they did not need to leave it because of well-paid jobs or facilities.
To conclude, taking everything into account it must be said that, currently, this problem still is a crucial issue for our society. Countries should discover the Japan's example to avoid such following problem as overpopulation in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...s in cities which are created literally everyday. Thus, megalopolises are required to fi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still, thus, well, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7956761109 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618374558304 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7882353886 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4375 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278315910244 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771345746382 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690398803617 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150842928128 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032557982809 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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