In the modernized era, there are a lot of opportunities for youth in towns and cities, hence, fewer young people are reluctant to live in villages. According to some people, it can deteriorate the quality of life of old people and society as well. This essay will elucidate the issues caused by this trend in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, deprive of the current generation contributes to not the development of the countrysides. It is obviously, many old people suffer from healthy problems and could not work effectively, since that, fewer people working in establishments, especially, at schools. Moreover, youth symbolizes energy, enthusiasm and life itself, thus it will cause a detrimental effect on place where there are no young people. Although, old people might find it rather beneficial to live in such a society full of updates and vigorous life, who will care of old people if the place lacks special organizations provided by young ones. Old people are often needed to protection as same as children.
So it will be a question; “Why young people appreciate life in urban areas?”. Because more and more individuals find it difficult to maintain a successful life in villages. Personally, I think they are right and the government should hold the responsibility of young people. As an example, the parliament in Russia has promised to give a home to each young family who will work in local hospitals. This promise had impeded many people to resist to the countryside. Owing to this, the government is required to establish new buildings to provide all the comforts to young people.
To conclude, to interest the current generation it is believed that the government should be more practical, thus both generations could benefit from this.
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- The government should make people take responsibility for their actions to the environment. To what extent do you agree? 56
- Nowadays parents are sending their children to trips abroad for educational purposes.What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? 78
- Some people believe that people who do physical work should be paid on par with the people who have high-level degreesDo you agree or disagree? 61
- Nowadays some people think that public libraries are not necessary, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion and examples. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th generations could benefit from this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12714776632 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98455932821 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567010309278 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.568841771 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26666666667 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249215781447 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809272963413 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532023867105 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148667349876 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615430202638 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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