Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on young children.
Do you agree or disagree?
A computer has became indispensible now a days. no one can expect life without it. while using computer
has lots of benefits, however there are drawbacks too. this essay will discuss both views. In my opinion positive effects overweight negative one.
Firstly, after invention of this man made machine, many of human task has became easier. it has drastically decreased human workload. earlier in offices, there was a huge amount of paper work to do, now among these more then 80% work is done by computer. it has an incredible memory that man never can have. Secondly, using computer one can learn even without a teacher as google have all the information available on different sites. A person can watch a movie, can do their online business while staying at home, play different types of video games, even can search any of data or even e books. For instance, in my Laptop i have thousands of soft copy books, that even my college library doesn't have. Furthermore, with the use of computer scientists are successful in evolving robot who will perform all task that men perform.so, there are infinite benefits of computer in this morder era.
however it has many drawbacks. Mainly man has becane addicted to it. it has great influenece on school children. children spend many hours on computer which adversly affect their study as well as health too. spending long time on computer screen may damage their eyes and vision. Moreover, the information given on google or other search engine is not always true. For example, side effects of certain drugs available on one site of differnt on other side, which sometime mislead to people searching for it.
to recapitulate, computer has became inevitable in current generation. though it has some drawbacks but lots of benefits to all aged people, science, students and everywhere. use of computer has became part of everyone's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97151898734 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56303913435 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617088607595 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.705701465 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.3043478261 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7391304348 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73913043478 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236531593944 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573028240982 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488324694423 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115966163802 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427048129991 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.