Company Top level Authorities should or should not take employees suggestions or ideas to take any decisions. Discuss
It is always said that, any Organization's growth is determined based on its employees. The top-level management must always consider their employees' suggestions as a part of their activity, since they are much aware about their company's insight and its pros and cons. In this essay, some of the reasons for collecting the employees' opinions and its drawbacks are explained.
Firstly, in any company, its employees have the in-depth knowledge of its process and methodologies in detail rather than the top authorities. This can help in improving the process much more that can enhance the productivity or performance of a company. In addition to this, the employees ideas or suggestions in core level business can grow their profit exponentially since, some of them interacts with the real customers outside and their problems.
Apart from this, having face off meeting with its employees for their opinions could enhance their convenience to optimize the transparent view that gives them confidence and healthy work-life which could improve the efficiency of an organization.
But, there are always some problems that could associate with discussing things with its employees since, there may be some data breach that could occur due to sharing confidential details with its employees. Also, there may be the possibility of miscommunication in talking every small things with employees, that could lead to spreading up of false information.
To sum up, employees always explain good feedback since both organization and its employees get mutually benefited in discussing the facts. Hence any organization must always consider their employees opinions and facts without sharing the confidential or sensitive information to its employees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, apart from, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52611940299 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97671169947 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559701492537 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.901799601 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.636363636 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12719743633 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555138159089 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405764716486 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766306993676 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043370186516 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 12.6369458128 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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