Many democratic countries report low voter turnout in people aged 18-25. Why do you think many young people are not voting?
Politics is necessary for social structure and regulation. But instead of what have being practiced, politicians should represent the people’s will and not push the population away. Rates of the elections around the world shows off scaring statistics, lower voter turnouts, and increase number of absence of votes, blanks and null. It leads to a research wondering why is that happening, and a few reasons for the dissatisfaction presented.
The world is changing and I can’t think in a segment of our environment that should not follow the evolution. We are being ruled by an old-fashioned system that starts now to be apathetic to society. One of the reasons for the turnouts is it, the incompatibility between the citizens and their government model. New ways to rule and think in the good of people and the natural resources around them. A behalf exchanges based machine is already enough and attracts no interesting.
Not only the working apparatus, but our options for rulers are really bad. People don’t find anybody that represents their morale or ideas. Even worse, most of the candidates are well-known involved in corruption and crimes. Honestly, people are repudiating that sickness but we still tied in to them. The exposing of how much people demand new rulers was the elections for Brazil and USA presidents. Both of Bolsonaro and Trump are way different of what we are used to see in candidates. Like them or not, they are a change, even they are not what we need yet.
Youngsters commonly have a think outside the box and are more often to see the big picture, and some of them unsuccessfully tries to change the bit that they can, but they are knock down and lose their faith for changes and some advancement. It would be needed a sharpest attack to make some renew. An important concept to have in mind is that the population have an incredible power if stick together.
However, the signs of a demand for differentiation are stated in the ballot box. Evolution is coming and will be a little of waiting game for it happen. Not accommodated, we as population, which understand what we need and demands what we want, should be more activists for our own good. Democracy is about citizens will and nothing else but it. The change starts by the numerous part of society, citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ll tied in to them. The exposing of how much people demand new rulers was the electi...
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Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to seeing'.
Suggestion: used to seeing
... Trump are way different of what we are used to see in candidates. Like them or not, they a...
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Line 4, column 26, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...we need yet. Youngsters commonly have a think outside the box and are more often to s...
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Line 4, column 262, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, honestly, however, if, really, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86835443038 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82317190966 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551898734177 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0210057391 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.125 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4583333333 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 5.45110844103 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0769434742066 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0223067413646 0.076458572812 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320448247709 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0449283963718 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317690277869 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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