Many democratic countries report low voter turnout in people aged 18-25. Why do you think many young people are not voting?
To be a wealthy and right people who takes responsibility for their decision, it is important to do the vote for better democratic countries. Indeed, there are several reasons why especially young age people do not vote than the people who are in the older age range. However, I believe the main reason why people in age 18-25 are not willing to vote is laziness and disappointment.
Ordinarily, in several democratic countries, government is trying to grantee the time and place for the vote. During the day-off for the vote, young age people spend voting time for leisure or take rest rather than use time for voting. The people highly interested in politics may upset about young people’s decision. Because the time they have to spend for the vote is merely 5 to 15 minutes.However, according to the survey from polling center, over the 60 percent of the young age people responded that the time they have to spend for voting requires more time than they expected. Additionally, it is hard to make a long free time except for voting day. To pay the rent fee or extra cost for living, young age people who do not have stable income need to spend more time than old people. The participation on voting and politics is naturally increase than young age people. Therefore, regardless of policies the government made, young age people are unable to direct or indirect influence for their future and further living.
In addition, the young age group are disappointed on government. On news or media constantly report the fault of politicians or side effect of decision to public. it could be the strategy of the opponent or the significant mistake that government commit. furthermore, it is impossible to satisfy all the citizens. Even in the small city, several opinions exist and quarrel with each other for the profit they will have. These kinds of images are reflected on young age people. they are not only disappointed about the images and faults that old age people made but they also refuse to vote with the reason that one vote power is uninfluential to change the policy. it soon turns to the indifference. The more campaign and promotion are on the progress and the more antipathy is built.
For the conclusion, people who are in age 18-25 are hard to directly get advantage from the vote they do. furthermore, the images and decision they felt since they were young were already turned to a trauma. Not only memory related with the vote is turned to disappointment, but it also became indifference.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, except for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2106.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.875 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71502812941 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467592592593 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1475983508 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5652173913 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7826086957 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47826086957 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287232220109 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960970338345 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855222711035 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207490796293 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905433236741 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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