Many people believe that educational standards have declined in recent time, particularly in the areas of literacy and numeracy,
discuss the cause of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.
It is presumed that, lately there has been a downgrade in the standard of education; as a result, people are facing difficulties even in reading and dealing with numbers. In the following essay, I aim to identify the sources of this problem, including the overuse of technology in classrooms as well as some viable solutions including the changes required in the study patterns.
From my perspective, the significant contributor to the issue is technology itself. Many educational institutes are compelling kids to use tablets or calculators, while it is irrefutably true that they should be well versed with technology, however, this interference of external tools including calculators for performing calculations and tablets for reading, may inhibit learning and development of human brain. Kids in previous generation were used to use abacus or Vedic mathematics strategies, which in addition to solve numeric problems, helped kids to develop analytical skills. In addition to this, students nowadays are more inclined towards watching videos, rather than spending time with books, which is indeed detrimental to learning.
In order to improve educational outcomes, we therefore, should inhibit the use of external methods and gadgets in the classroom and should rather incorporate conventional methodologies and approaches in learning which would not just make our self smart, but also independent. Not to mention, focusing on learning from books will surely be beneficial for improving reading skills.
Drawing from this, learners should focus on using traditional methods and not being dependent on electronic equipment. Though they are not so convenient, I believe sometimes the harder way is the best way.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-07-26 | bhatvishal@ | 78 | view |
| 2019-02-05 | rupeshgonte | 78 | view |
- Many people believe that educational standards have declined in recent time, particularly in the areas of literacy and numeracy,discuss the cause of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it. 78
- Children are facing more pressure these days from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressure. 84
- Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.Please write and submit your essay on the above topic. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 157, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'believe'.
Suggestion: sometimes believe
...t. Though they are not so convenient, I believe sometimes the harder way is the best way.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60305343511 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03867616295 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645038167939 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.1968911291 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.8 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0991984318771 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345020508267 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306051416119 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582035908261 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371197162706 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.