While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter explain
- what happened
- apologize for the accident
- tell your friend what you plan to do about the bowl.
Dear Alan,
I hope this letter finds you well. First of all, I would like to apologise for the loss incurred, which was caused by our negligence. As, you were aware that we had already planned a party at your place, before you got a call from your office. As per the plan, party was organised for Saturday.
Let me explain you in detail. I was expecting, few people to show up but fortunately a lot of our friends showed up and were highly excited to see agglomeration of historical items at your place. Moreover, few of them tried to touch them, but luckily, I was able to stop them from damaging them. However, I couldn't stop John from getting hold of bowl and while trying to maintain balance, it got dropped and fell on the floor.
However, further damage was curtailed and happily, Brandon was there as well who has recently started working in an organisation, that specialises in fixing broken items. Therefore, bowl was taken by Brandon, to get it fixed. Moreover, John was embarrassed by his behaviour and has apologised for the damage that is been caused. Moreover, he wants to pay for the damage and also, has planned a party at his house for next week.
Regards,
Mark
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lan, party was organised for Saturday. Let me explain you in detail. I was expe...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...top them from damaging them. However, I couldnt stop John from getting hold of bowl and...
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Line 7, column 330, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sed for the damage that is been caused. Moreover, he wants to pay for the damage and als...
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Line 9, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at his house for next week. Regards, Mark
^^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for next week. Regards, Mark
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66509433962 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50152587823 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641509433962 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4500749995 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4166666667 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258133623322 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779133519225 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632253507518 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16467406804 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660469005889 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.