students choose universities where near home, or students choose universities that are far away from home.
In modern world, some of the students prefer to study in universities which are in far away locations and some people prefer to study in locations near to their home. While, some people claim that there are more advantages in studying in far away locations, on my point of view I would recommend to study in a closer by location. In this essay, I shall discuss on the factors to convince my view while analyzing both advantages and disadvantages of the argument.
Firstly, if a student select a university closer to their home they can save their travelling cost and time as well. For an instance, those students can use that time either to do part time jobs else, they can utilize that time for further studies. Moreover, those students can keep some of their students in their premises which will help them in group studying.
On the other hand, some people prefer to study in universities located in different locations because they want to get exposure on different cultures. Besides that, they have to incurr high expenditure on food and lodging. In addition, they will lose time to spend withtheir family members.
In conclusion, I think it's better to select a near by location because it would help the student development in many aspects. In nutshell, government bears the responsibility of establishing state universities and allowing private universities to open up their institutions around the country to increase the availability of education for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
In modern world, some of the students prefer to study in universitie...
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Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...students can use that time either to do part time jobs else, they can utilize that time f...
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Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...clusion, I think its better to select a near by location because it would help the stud...
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Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he student development in many aspects. In nutshell, government bears the responsi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.5418719212 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03673469388 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83488708 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6200841537 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.181818182 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.25397266985 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225700775476 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822033574071 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783342475769 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12764717031 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540042531909 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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