Students at a university often have o choice of places to live.Some students choose to live in university dormitories.Others choose to live in apartments in the community .Where ould you prefer to live ?Give reasons and specific details to support your preference.
It is quite apparent that the importance of education has increased since last twenty years.Most
students are forced to live away from their families to get a good education .While some students
prefer to live in üniversity dormitary ,others choose to live in aparments in the community . Althoug
both sides have several pros . I am of the opinion that live in aparments in the community offers
numerous facilities and educaitonal advantages that shouldn’t be ignored . I will elvcidate the details
of my support with some tongible detail and examples in the following parargraphes.
Firstly ,it is an indisputable fact that there are many facilities tol ive in aparments . For example
,Students who live in aparments has also good enviroment for study .They can invite their friends and
cook dinner. They can come back home whenever they want . Moreover they have chance to have
their own rooms.Living in aparments you can manage your time according to your desire.
Furthermore , It is trainer for them .It teaches them to live alone ,prepares them for life.many things
are in responsibility like cooking ,shopping and paying the bills as well as. These things make you
ready to real life. That ‘s why I would prefer tol ive in apartments than dormitary.
On the other hand ,some students prefer to live in dormitary.Living in dormitary offer students make
friends also from other countries . Students can not find time to be alone . Whenever they feel
themselves alone I am sure that there is a person to speak . However Dormitaries are so
crowded.Students can not be comfortable.Besides ,they have to be in dormitary at certain
hours.Therefore ,living in aparments is better than living in dormitary.
Although both üniversity housing and aparment have advantages . I perefe to live in an aparment
where I feel myself more comfortable. Because I can on my attention to lessons in my own room and
prepare myself in to the
- Students at a university often have o choice of places to live.Some students choose to live in university dormitories.Others choose to live in apartments in the community .Where ould you prefer to live ?Give reasons and specific details to support your pr 75
- Students at a university often have o choice of places to live.Some students choose to live in university dormitories.Others choose to live in apartments in the community .Where ould you prefer to live ?Give reasons and specific details to support your pr 3
- Students at a university often have o choice of places to live.Some students choose to live in university dormitories.Others choose to live in apartments in the community .Where ould you prefer to live ?Give reasons and specific details to support your pr 75
- It has recently been announced that a movie theater may be built in your neighborhood.do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 68
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i feel, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19242902208 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07422357098 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548895899054 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.7040078589 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4444444444 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6111111111 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.53405017921 463% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 35.0 5.5376344086 632% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28050873544 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077292990748 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739638737476 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841547313409 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900494145407 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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