The bar chart shows the top 10 countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

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The bar chart shows the top 10 countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The bar chart above illustrates how much electricity (in billion kwh) is produced and utilized by ten developed countries in 2014.

Overall, we can see that china and the usa both generated and consumed the most amount of electricity, whereas the production and usage of electricity were the lowest in korea. Except for germany, all nine countries made more electricity than they used.

In 2014, china produced 5398 billion kwh electricity and utilized 5322 billion kwh, followed by the usa, which made and used 4099 and 3866 billion kwh, accordingly. These two countries ranked the first and the second in both electricity production and consumption. korea generated 485.1 billion kwh and used 449.5 billion kwh electricity, which made it the last country in the chart.

Another thing that can be noticed is that the production of electricity outweighs the consumption of electricity in 9 countries. Meanwhile, germany had opposite trends. In 2014, germany utilized more electricity (582.5 billion kwh) than it generated (526.6 billion kwh).

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, second, whereas, while, another thing, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50909090909 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83940525854 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9094654449 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251034807118 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117745908975 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749183307895 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174508169926 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434384557522 0.0819641961636 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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