Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The rules protecting young people from danger or temptation play in an important role in our society. Some people may believe that "The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict." However, I disagree with this statement. This opinion is supported by the following reasons.
First of all, in Japan, young people who commit a crime are not reported using their real names in media such as newspapers and televisions. There are a lot of rules which only impose them on the young person. For example, people under the age of 18 can not get a driving license. However, if teenagers drive a car without a license and are caught by the police, they are not exposed to their real names in Japan. On the other hand, the people over the age of 20 are reported a crime using their real names if they commit it.
Second, there are schools for young people who commit a crime. these schools teach moralities to them and give opportunities to return to society. For instance, When I was a junior high school student, there was a man whose behavior was bad. he committed a crime and entered a reform school. Several years later, I came across him. I was surprised by him because he became a polite man. According to him, thanks to the school, he always learned a lot of things and got a job. On the contrary, in the case of older people who commit a crime, it is difficult to return to society.
Certainly, some people feel that there are plenty of rules only for young people. An example of this, teenagers are limited in regard to drinking alcohol, getting a driving license, smoking and so on. However, I consider these rules to protect them from the dark side of society. Furthermore, the government gives them a chance to return the society by going to the reform school. Therefore I think the rules are not strict.
In conclusion, these reasons I mentioned above, I disagree with the statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in regard to, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66569767442 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49859174777 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520348837209 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3108929257 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9545454545 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.31818181818 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247289265026 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681093639991 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917455637303 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159132160221 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127802653059 0.0645574589148 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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