plastic bags should be banned
It is often argued that forbid plastic bags can have more benefits for environment , in the following essay , I will explain why I agree with this viewpoint.
Although using plastic bags are easy to carry our goods and cheap , there are considerable positive effects for our earth that we can stop use plastic bags. The problem is that these bags can’t biodegrade , which means if they are not recycled , they will stay in earth forever and become pollution. Due to they are light , plastic bags can easily blow out of landfills to everywhere.Some animals like bird or fish might mistake plastic bags for food , which leads to choking and poisoning can result in death.
In addition,another Disadvantage of plastic bags are made from oil which is limited resource we have to maintain it. For the reason that we can start to use disposable plastic like bottles,plastic utensils or wrappers instead use reusable items. For instance we can carry our owe metal straws and chopstick, bring a bag made from cloth when you are shopping. Afterwards,we won’t have to ask for a plastic bags that help us to reduce plastic waste.
In conclusion, both environment and energy source can benefit from stop using disposable plastic. Hence, I am totally convinced that plastic bags should be banned as fast as we can.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98181818182 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78022085031 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609090909091 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4484567575 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.6 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346238929926 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155313782562 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131367696337 0.0667982634062 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222512899049 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101341600664 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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