some people say government should subsidised the fruits and vegetables to make healthy food cheaper. Some other say it should be tax to unhealthy food.
discuss both views and give your own opinion
It is undeniable fact that fruits and vegetables are rich in vitamins and proteins as compared with junk and fast food, it is responsibility of the Government to balance the price based on type of food. Few people believe Government should offer subsidy and make the healthy food available at lower cost while other considers the junk food consumer should be taxed for consuming unhealthy food. In this essay will discuss about both the views and submit my thoughts.
Healthy citizens have an imperative role to play in the development of the country, hence Government should considers the pricing of the healthy foods, as they need to be within purchasing limit of the citizens. Awareness has to be created for healthy life and its health benefits in the long run. For instance Government publishes several advert on television stating about free medicines, grocery and its benefits at affordable price. Hence government subsidy is very much essential for the good health of its citizens.
On the contrary few believe that people health is their own responsibility even though fast foods are tasty but have a negative health impact, hence there is a need of higher tax on such food. This leads to increase in cost of those unhealthy food and people tend to stop such consumption. Ultimately health of people will improve. The excise tax on Junk products are higher, resultant people consume less as a result of high price. therefore increase in tax has a direct relation with the consumption of products.
To summarize healthy food is basic need of every citizen, Government should facilitate its citizens in providing healthy food at the subsidized price. Health is wealth and maintain the same by maintaining health food and diet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, therefore, while, as to, for instance, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05902777778 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66208509417 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0179933461 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.071428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310122584286 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100120919398 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828873059332 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197563067689 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100108641045 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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