You recently went to Australia for a holiday. However, your return flight was delayed by a day.
Write a letter to the airline company. In your letter:
Introduce yourself
Complain about the delay
Explain the problems that it caused you
Ask for a letter of apology and / or some form of compensation
Dear Sir,
My name is Ben Rocher and I am a member of your premium class membership program and a passenger who took your flight on February 20 from New Delhi to Bangalore. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with your service.
My return flight was booked on February 24 and was delayed by a day and was not communicated to any of the passengers. After reaching the airport, I got to know about the postponement and due to this, I have missed an important meeting that can cost me my job. To elucidate, firstly, I was supposed to present an important presentation to our foreign clients which of course, I will not be able to present now. Secondly, because of the delay, I incurred additional costing of lodging and food expenses of about Rs 10,000. Finally, I missed my nephew’s first performance in a play at his school which holds an emotional value for me.
I would like you to compensate me since all the consequences are caused by your airline. Also, I am entitled to get an apology letter to my boss from your organisation clearly stating the reason behind the delay.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Ben
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63942307692 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85626695352 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644230769231 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6210200297 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7272727273 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240069040116 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881836718404 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496811546651 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128530870421 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440243721593 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.