you have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter
* describe the item
* explain where and when you left it
* say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you about the item which I lost during my journey from New Delhi to Bhopal. I was travelling on Jan 24, 2019, in Shatabdi express, Coach number A1 on seat number 54. To elucidate, I lost my laptop bag on the train and the brand name is "American express" embossed on the front. It has three compartments. In one of the compartments, I had kept my 15-inch laptop. my passport, ID cards, some official documents and mobile charger is in the bag.
I am a frequent traveller but this is the first time anything like this had happened. Since it is a long journey and makes me exhausted, so I kept it in the over head space. Later, in the morning I forgot to take it and realised when I reached home.
I have already lodged a complaint about it in the railways and would like you to take this matter at utmost priority. If possible, you can send the bag to my address which I have shared with your department or please buzz me at the 9818654756.
Looking forward to your rapid response.
Yours faithfully,
Dennis
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 409, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...artments, I had kept my 15-inch laptop. my passport, ID cards, some official docum...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45918367347 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69064818804 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0624209461 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2307692308 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0769230769 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20758638315 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575606434244 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718600467843 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101601602992 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682524128573 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.