Some people believe that radio is the best way to get news while others think that TV is better for this purpose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Due to technical advancements, number of innovations has taken place in gadgets which provide access to global mews. People have different views whether for for getting news radio is best method or television channels provide advantage over radio channels. I believe that news can be obtained from TV is a effective way.
On the one hand, some people put forward the argument that listen to radio is best method for accessing news. Firstly, radio is cheaper source of taking news as there is no need of large financial investment on radio , everyone can afford the initial expenses . What is more, radios may be operated without electricity therefore, the people who lives in areas where they have no electricity connections , radio is taken as primary source by them. Secondly, radio news brings reliability as limited channels are available on radios which provides authentic information only. As a result, people turn towards radio for obtaining news. Most importantly, some people are using since too long time so they consider the radio news ideal for them.. Finally, the most significant feature is portability, it is impossible in case of TV as we listen as well as watch the news. However, while we are jogging, cooking, driving or meeting other works we can pick it in the pocket.
On the other hand, I opine that for ample of reasons, television play an lead role in providing news. First of all, everyone use technical gadgets now a days owing to additional features. Television contains both audio and visual components and which brings convenience for audience as they can listen as well as watch the news. Besides this, getting news from radio is regarded as boring by people but television is a interesting way to take news. Additionally, television helps either make attention or create long lasting impact on minds of people as pictures moving in front of their eyes. For an instance, they can observe car accidents, damage and route causes which provide more information in detail as compared to radio. Also, it win the interests of audience by displaying pictures. Last but not least, plenty of channels are telecasted on television which provides immediate news without delay therefore, television provide more benefits over radio.
To conclude, although people support the opinion that radio is best way to access news yet I believe that TV provides news in a more effective way as it has not only audio but also visual content.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, as a result, as well as, first of all, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2051.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03931203931 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66072968393 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525798525799 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 652.5 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0182521955 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.55 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.35 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 68.0 5.01903807615 1355% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328390991144 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107537449612 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845621640564 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231052858832 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418042924988 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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