Some people believe that overpopulation is the major cause for most of the world's urgent problems. Do you agree or disagree?
These days, overpopulation is one of the most important things to improve the quality of human life. I completely agree that it is a reason of increase unemployment, the decline in natural resources because people use lands for accommodation.
First of all, population growth is the factors of environment pollution, water pollution, lands pollution and noisy pollution. When the country is undeveloped and have not improved education, people will lose their sense of environmental protection. With the air pollution, people use a lot of fuel to operate cars, motorcycles, buses and train. Therefore, they emit harmful smoke for health. In addition, homeless people will stay under the bridge or on the street. People who live there will be worst in a country.
Secondly, the amount number of people apply for the jobs leads to unemployment. They will not have money to buy or rent houses, food and water. So, some of them will steal or also kill people to get money, food and water to use.
Finally, population increments will lead to deforestation and loss of ecosystems, wild animals will not have shelter, rare plants will cut down to serve the purpose of people.
In conclusion, I believe that if the countries wants to develop sustainably, it is very necessary to improve the education of the life awareness and the government need to spread widely to people about this serious problem. I sure that the population growth will be improved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12916666667 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88024581802 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616666666667 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.4837120182 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9285714286 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127551377662 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459528883545 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354626760858 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709377343411 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047190138919 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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