It is difficult for people in the cities to get enough physical exercise. What are the causes and solution?
Urbanization is a boon as well as curse to the man kind, eventhough cities are providing several amenities to its citizens, at the same time cities it is taking away the healthy life style and activities. In my opinion Fast pace life and urbanization has led to this problem.
There are many factors which has become hurdle in having healthy life style, urbanization is the prime one, which has made the life of humans a machine, Most of the time people spend their time in office workstation, the prime reason is competition which has led to work life imbalance. They are hardly left with any time to do the exercise and other physical activities. As per the recent research conducted by BBC, 60% of the adults in India, spend their time in office/college, hence the people of cities are unable to dedicate the time for doing exercise and are facing several health issue like obesity, sugar, BP etc at young age.
To make it even, individual should take care of their health as first priority. The companies and institution should create awareness of the healthy lifestyle among its employees, illustrating the need of doing regular exercise and dedicate some time on the daily basis for doing exercise and yoga in their own vicinity. People should be encouraged to use cycle to commute to office. As a result its beneficial to the overall population of the cities and its economic growth. The merits of this is infinite eventhough results are not immediate.
The conclusion to be drawn is that, although there is low scope of doing healthy exercise/activities in urban life, we need to pave a way for leading the healthy life, either by walking, cycling or by joining gym. As quoted, "The wealthiest person in the world is the one who is physically and mentally healthy".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, well, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8660130719 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78482957264 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.8748638343 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.083333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0947761753308 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353510548155 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259645292137 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0577513532369 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114119297419 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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