Below is a line char showing incidence of serious crime in a large UK city from December to November. Total incidence of violent crime are shown in addition to incidence of 4 serious crime types.
The line graph depicts the data of crime rates in the United Kingdom in four serious crime categories like anti social behavior, violent crime, robbery and criminal damage. Overall, anti social behavior is the highest type of serious crime than other types.
It is clear from the graph that, in the month of December, about 420 incidence of anti social behaviorsported from UK which is almost four times higher that of criminal damage. In the mid February the ASB saw a drop of around 20 incidence before preceded by almost 600 in the mid April, and then it shows some ups and downs and peaked at a level of over 600 incidence in October before declining to nearly 400 in November.
With regards to the violent crime rate, initially, there were around 200 incidence of crime and it experienced minimal fluctuations throughout the period. In the case of robbery and criminal damage were fall under nearly 150 incidence and it remained almost constant all the time.
In conclusion, since anti-social behavior was the most popular serious crime in Uk city, the lowest crime rates accounted from other types.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...November. With regards to the violent crime rate, initially, there were around...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93617021277 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48442409025 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563829787234 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3059920308 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.571428571 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391302783727 0.215688989381 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178879006212 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071487187291 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228621018951 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422954217474 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.