Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. Others believe that international sporting event bring more problems than benefits. Discuss both views and include your opinion, supported by examples.
In this era of global connectivity, international sporting events are gaining huge popularity. Many people believe hosting a global sporting event brings many benefits than drawbacks. I find this topic contentious and will elucidate with relevant examples and finally conclude it with my opinion.
First and foremost it a matter of great pride for any country to host a global tournament as it not only provides visibility to the host country on a global map but additionally also brings a plethora of business and employment opportunities. To elucidate further in the recent past many smaller nations like Bangladesh, Singapore and Srilanka hosted major sporting events like football and cricket world cup which aided in creating new jobs in the hospitality sector. Additionally, it also assisted in generating revenue which was further used for the development of that nation. In a recent survey done by Reuters it was mentioned that during the cricket world cup hosted by Srilanka, there was growth in the hospitality sector by 30 per cent.
Secondly on the other hand hosting international sporting events also puts a country under a lot of pressure as the government needs to make sure of the security arrangement for the tourists as well as players from other countries. Since the majority of a Security arrangement is dedicated towards the stadiums and hotels which leaves the other parts of city venerable thus providing an opportunity for crime to happen. Similar problems were seen in Rio Olympics games where the local crime saw a drastic increase during this event. Additionally, in developing nations, some faux mind finds this as the right opportunity to do corruption. In India during the commonwealth games, a corruption of 2000 crores was reported.
To sum up it is evident that though there are some drawbacks for hosting global sporting events but the benefits clearly offset the downside thus, in my opinion, international sporting events brings many advantages which are better for the growth and development of that nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23333333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88831120169 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557575757576 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.7978795004 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.846153846 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296976790998 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104961748737 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111420979029 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202076117916 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076485595143 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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