You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter1.Explain why you want to take time off work2.Give details of the amount of time you need3.Suggest how

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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
1.Explain why you want to take time off work
2.Give details of the amount of time you need
3.Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter in reference to ask for some time off work as I am planning to go on leave.

As you are aware that I have been lately very occupied with some critical projects and now most of these projects are on the closure stage, so I wanted to take some time off work and rejuvenate myself from the stress and go on a short trip to a hill station. This will also be the right opportunity to take along my family as lately due to professional commitments I haven't been able to spend quality time with them.

I will be taking a short trip to Mount Abu and would need around four days so I am planning to leave on Wednesday next week and will be back on Saturday.

While I am away, I have already given handover to my peer who was working on these critical projects however in the case on an emergency I am always reachable on my cell phone.

I request you to please approve my leave request.
Yours sincerely
Brian

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well. I am writing th...
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...ately due to professional commitments I havent been able to spend quality time with th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...next week and will be back on Saturday. While I am away, I have already given ha...
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Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rove my leave request. Yours sincerely Brian
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25806451613 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30749782022 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2692598627 44.8134815571 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267516707635 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11092834074 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676798692182 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126727511591 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999635793761 0.0580467560999 172% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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