Some people prefer shopping in shopping centres while others prefer local markets. What are the advantages of each? Which shopping experience do you prefer?
People have different preferences in term of shopping places and shopping experience. Many people choose to shop in malls or plazas while others like to buy goods from a traditional market. The following essay explains about benefits of both places and also expresses my preference.
For a number of reasons, some people choose to purchase goods from a large marketplace. Firstly, shopping in a shopping mall is safer than that of local markets. Malls and plazas are equipped with the surveillance system and security guards ensure safety and security of customers. Secondly, shopping in a mega complex is more convenient and comfortable as most shopping malls are equipped with air conditioners that make the temperature soothing. Facilities like play zone for children, credit card payment, cineplex, food court etc. attracts many customers.
However, few people still prefer local markets for the price. It is common that in a traditional market people get comparatively cheaper prices. Many unique or traditional products are not sold in modern places that are available in local markets. For examples, handmade crafts are only sold in local markets and each of the items is unique because it is a custom made product.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that shopping in modern market places or in traditional markets has their own positive sides. I personally like to shop at a local market because I am a good bargainer and I could buy things at a better price. Shopping experience, price and variety of goods in a local market makes it more suitable for me to shop there more frequently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12213740458 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79910247255 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538167938931 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5512975169 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.875 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30793151618 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106415883181 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106728664116 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191045219824 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594772085298 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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