More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
Wild animals play a key role in the ecosystem and maintaining the balance of the food chain. It is observed that more numbers of wild animals are disappearing from this world and the existing ones are about to vanish. This essay discusses the causes of this and put forward several solutions for that.
To begin with, the foremost reasons are poaching and natural calamities. Even though government rules are in action, animal hunting is continuing in almost every part of the world. To illustrate this, the forest department of India published a report of animals that are found as killed, where most of the animals missing the body parts such as tusk, skin and other parts which are valuable in the market. Moreover, natural calamities also have its own role to wipe out animals from the forest. Flood and forest fire are just two to name. An epitome for this is, a variety of snake species is vanished from the face of the earth due to the heavy forest fire happened in one province of Australia.
Finally, the remedies to these problems are an awareness from government and precautionary methods against calamities. The government should communicate to the people, that the significance of wild animals and the after effects if something happens to the natural food chain. Additionally, the government can stringent the rules and punish who violate the law. To prevent natural calamities, the government can take help from the public who stay near the forest. By planting more and special species of plants which can withstand the flood and drought. For example, almost all the villages in the Kerala state, one of the states in India which share its most borders with western ghat's thick forest, the panjayath has formed a team of youth and educated them to fight against natural calamities especially which originate from forests such as flood and forest fire.
To sum up, this essay discussed the reasons behind animal extinction such as hunting, natural calamities. In addition, this essay also discussed solutions to this such as proper awareness from government and precautionary mechanisms for floods and forest fire.
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Suggestion:
... happened in one province of Australia. Finally, the remedies to these problems ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, moreover, so, as for, for example, in addition, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0395480226 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58088841871 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514124293785 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1492232579 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.941176471 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208440812736 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731912612698 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568667587178 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154688908147 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637285000129 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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