You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to a friend.
In your letter
1) explain why you have moved.
2) describe the new house.
3) Invite your friend to come and visit.
Dear Ben,
How have you been? It has been a long time since we last met. I am writing in reference to inform you that I have recently moved to a new apartment. Let me elucidate further.
The reason for the movement is that the previous house was located far away from my office and lacked basic amenities like parking, gymnasium and swimming pool. However, the new apartment is spacious and has three rooms, two bathrooms and a living room. From the alfresco part of the apartment, you can see the panoramic view of the beautiful Lake Forest which rejuvenates your stressful mind. Additionally, it is located in the suburbs of the city much nearer to my office. Now the hassles of driving to and from my office are over which resulted in fatigue. Now I would be able to spend some quality time on leisure activities like reading and sports.
Why you don’t pay us a visit on Saturday as it has been a long time since we have met? I believe it will be a good opportunity to explore our new house and locality.
I look forward to your response
Warm Wishes
Ben
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| 2019-03-11 | vinshu koul | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51794871795 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48655027727 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6186092687 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7692307692 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.61538461538 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186003562503 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626719954398 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848484366392 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125626889665 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658077648822 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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