People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?

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People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?

There has recently been a phenomenon of people moving to big cities for dwelling, which puts the cities under the pressure of getting overcrowded. It would be followed by a load of problems for city dwellers in any activities that need the efforts of governments and individuals to deal with.

When the cities getting more and more crowded, there would be certain difficulties in meeting the demand of people lives. The very first issue to be mentioned is lack of accommodation. As the cities only take up 2 per cent of land on the earth, affording a house or a flat in such overpopulated cities is a real challenge for many people and could be the root cause of homelessness and poverty. Furthermore, traffic congestion is considered to be a controversial issue in large cities. Take Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam for an example, every day it takes people a lot of time to commute to schools and workplaces in the polluted air of traffic fumes that may trigger health problems. In terms of public infrastructure, the services are sometimes under expectation because of overloaded work.

There are several actions that should be taken to solve the problems mentioned above. First of all, there is a need for governments to have a long-term strategy for widening the cities to the surrounding areas to get more space and offer more accommodation for inhabitants. The second measure would be to develop public transport and upgrade public facilities to encourage people to reduce private vehicles use and offer more satisfied services. City dwellers could contribute to decreasing the stress of urban life by such a simple way like commuting by public transport instead of private cars and motorbikes.

In conclusion, urban life would be much easier and more liveable with the effort and cooperation of governments and individuals.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, well, as to, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01639344262 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9492090322 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6139600907 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.692307692 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202596764949 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682577966866 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042828239726 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123388205851 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449781520189 0.056905535591 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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