The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between
1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of the people who has 65 years old and over in 3 various countries from 1940 to 2040, in a duration of 100 years.
Overall, as it can be seen the proportion of population of United States of America, Sweden and Japan aged 65 and over has an increasment and countinous until 2040.
As it given in the graph, pointed countries have a rise in being old population. USA, Sweden and Japan had 10%, 8% and 5% respectively in 1940, whereas approximates will have almost 23%, 25% and 27% in 2040.
Japan decreased in 1940s and 1950s and remain static until nearly half of 1980 decade, but an upward trend started and gradually shot up til 2023. Graph predict that people aged 65 and over will organise more than 27 percent of sociaty.
USA and Japan almost had a gradual imporovement between 1940 and 1980, althoght had a decrease from 1980 but an upward trend apears and it will increase about 25% in 2040.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: HAVE_CD_YEARS[1]
Message: This phrase is used with 'be': 'is 65 years old'.
Suggestion: is 65 years old
...trates the percentage of the people who has 65 years old and over in 3 various countries from 19...
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Line 4, column 17, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1940s'.
Suggestion: in the 1940s
..., 25% and 27% in 2040. Japan decreased in 1940s and 1950s and remain static until nearl...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56470588235 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47629592789 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.49200331 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.857142857 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207261483954 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103248513464 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898844584796 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123139298522 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786982730347 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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