Topic:Living in big cities is bad for people’s health.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option.
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:14.0pt;line-height:115%">In the
contemporary society, this is a common belief that living in urban areas has
considerably affected to people’s health conditions.In my perspective, while I
agree that residing in metropolis would bring about problems about human
health, I strongly believe that humans can also have significant benefits from
this tendency.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:14.0pt;line-height:115%">On the one
hand, there are some underlying explanations why some people believe that this
could cause severe problems for people’s well-being.One explanation is that air
pollution might potentially influence to humans’ respiratory systems as a
growing number of vehicles are being used on a daily basis in every corner of
the globe.One further explanation is that water
contamination might be well known as a culprit to disorders of
children’s full development .In an illustration, a huge amount of newly-born
babies have had several health-related grave problems such as rickets and the
cleft in children’s chin.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:14.0pt;line-height:115%">However, I
would contend that this situation’s advantages might be more impressive .As for food safety
and hygience inspection establishments, they would be responsible for
inspecting food quality daily or monthly.This means that consumers might feel
far safer when living in metropolitan
areas than rural ones.Furthermore,healthcare services in boroughs would
be more likely to guarantee people’s health conditions in all ages as these
places have often employed well-qualified and licensed doctors and
nurses.Therefore, urban dwellers could ensure an improvement of their health.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:14.0pt;line-height:115%">In
conclusion, while it is true that city dwellers can have adverse effects on
their well-being when opting for living in major cities , I also hold my view
that this might be an advantageous option for urban inhabitants due to
aforementioned compelling reasons.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, as for, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2080.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.45519713262 5.12529762239 145% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.10388858537 2.80592935109 289% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641577060932 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 279.0 20.2975951904 1375% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2080.0 106.682146367 1950% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 279.0 20.7667163134 1343% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 87.0 7.06120827912 1232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 30.0 4.38176352705 685% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197699776527 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197699776527 0.084324248473 234% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0543557658686 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434599667546 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 153.2 13.0946893788 1170% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -245.55 50.2224549098 -489% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 116.8 11.3001002004 1034% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 27.47 12.4159519038 221% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.74 8.58950901804 265% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 66.0 9.78957915832 674% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 113.6 10.1190380762 1123% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 10.7795591182 213% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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