Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about the influences of artificial intelligence on human beings in the future. While some support developments of the machines, others might be concerned about the possible negative impacts of these computers. From my perspective, both significant merits and considerable drawbacks of machine intelligence could be brought to our lives.
On the one hand, the growth in the intelligence of technology appears to contribute to enhance the quality of life in the modern age. Artificial intellects would help people to reduce stress by doing for them daily life tasks that might cause extremely high pressure. For example, self-driving cars could be programmed to be able to automatically determine obstacles, communicate with one another and estimate the shortest distance in order that people chauffeured seem to hardly need any effort to arrive at destinations. Furthermore, works executed in dangerous workplaces such as industrial welding or difficult exploration might be done by intellectual robots instead of humans
On the other hands, if people fail to take advantages of artificial intelligence prudently, it could have a variety of serious side effects on society. Firstly, as computers have been becoming increasingly intelligent, people are likely to encounter the threat of robots replacing human beings. A dramatic increase in automation in numerous industries which required highly accurate level possibly means that a huge number of people have to face being unemployed, for instance. Secondly, the risks of being overdependent on machine intelligence should also be taken into account. With help from intellectual robots, people tend to become more indolent, the fact that can cause some severe diseases such as obesity, diabetes and cardiovascular.
In conclusion, I believe that improvements in artificial intelligence could have various positive effects. However, people should also be careful about numerous negative impacts robotics could cause to the community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72425249169 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11167479992 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621262458472 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7471235348 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.538461538 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234390422309 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907811483796 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549590243381 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154680730608 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466932638253 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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