Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?.
Decision- making is always important skill to be mastered in our life. Some people think that currently we have many options to choose. I agreed with this view because I think we have too many options regarding our carrier and behaviour in our life style.
Meanwhile, there are variety of carrier, which people could choose. After finishing the high school, many people either choose to continue their study for higher degree or go seeking for internship or paid work straight after. Adding more, some prefer to study at public colleges while others are in favor of private colleges or university. Even more, graduates may love to continue their farther specialization in particular area of interest, going to be a Doctor or a computer scientist are al- different choices that we need to decide. Hence, we have an infinity number of choices regarding our carrier but it is not permitted for everyone.
Going within this vein, are the choices of our behavior with our life style. Regarding the social life, many people prefer not to communicate with friends online, for example. Others may depend solely on the internet and phone to get-in touch with their relatives and friends. Moreover, many individuals like to do sport while others love the sedentary life style. Even the keen-in-sport people have different choices to do their preferred sport weather in gym or in safari, for example.
In conclusion, I agreed that we have different and diverse group of choices in our lives. This is very correct if we think about our carrier or the social or health aspect of our life style. I recommend that everyone choose the appropriate option that fil mostly to his or her expectation and for the choices, I think there are in the increase in number in the foreseen future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94666666667 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53518353489 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516666666667 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6876514537 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.75 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214719839985 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079585652127 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657488638415 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144429156245 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574490016837 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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