Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people says trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns, while other says housing facilities should be build instead.
Do you agree or disagree.
It is thought by some that residential areas ought to be created in free place of urban areas while there are others who argue that trees should be planted there as planting trees is essential for the environment. In my opinion, although trees are beneficial for human and nature, people should build houses as lack of housing areas lead to overpopulation and high criminal rates.
It is considered that trees are essential for the environment, as trees provide oxygen that is crucial for humankind and living organisms and support entire life in the Earth. Having trees in our urban areas make people’s life more conventional and healthy, as trees filter an air and regulate temperature rates. For example, due to developing transport system air quality is poor in big cities and there is the only way to make it clearer is by creating green areas. Another point, is that green areas and trees help to regulate temperature, for instance, in hot summer days trees offer shade and make air colder, in cold windy winter days trees may reduce the speed of wind.
On the other hand, due globalization and overpopulation big cities and pre-urban areas are suffering from the lack of housing facilities. People who live in big cities are not able to afford appropriate conditions for living and as a result tension between family members might be very high. Another point to consider, due lack of housing facilities prices for apartments may be very high and young generation will be not able to buy any living space as a result some young people will have to commit a crime in order to find money. Furthermore, people living standards will be poor and not appropriate for living.
In conclusion, people should create appropriate living conditions for people to avoid tension among them, but trees should not be neglected.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to appropriate'
Suggestion: to appropriate
...ve in big cities are not able to afford appropriate conditions for living and as a result t...
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Line 5, column 616, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be poor and not appropriate for living. In conclusion, people should create appr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9512987013 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66547763837 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506493506494 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.7574658045 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.636363636 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3636363636 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395780458178 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160850790561 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997181453068 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265764667048 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10852248748 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.